I only sent this email to you and a few
other people. I don't want everyone
finding out about this special offer
so please keep the promo code to
yourself :)
"Wow we must be buddies...real pals!"
Truth is you know thousands of people got this! But I guess when the copy says only a few that is supposed to make the reader giggle with glee about being chosen to be apart of a select group.
"...oh man I better buy right now, yeah!"
Hey folks don't use this patronizing copy in your emails or marketing. You will find people respond better to honest, straight forward value presentations.